All Comments on 'My Mother, The Stripper'

My wife ended up dancing at the local lodge some 20 years ago. Similar in that I was the evening organizer and the dancer cancelled leaving me stuck.

The wife said she would fill in but just down to her bikini.

That went out the window when she got all fussed up and ended up on her back on the stage with her legs spread and no bikini. It was one hell of a show and no secrets.

The next guy that organized the club men's party tried to hire her for the next one but she wouldn't do it.

20 years and that night still fusses us both up.

I have done lots of different things but never been a stripper, it does sound like fun.

Good idea. However the writing and grammar were bad. No buildup. No good climax. No mother daughter stuff.

It was a first draft. Needs two more re-writes.

But you do use too many exclamation points! (See how odd it looks).

well written, the story was fun to read and enjoy. A 5 for sure!

Good story, but as was said above, you can't use an exclamation point at the end of every paragraph. It's exhausting to read. Keep writing!

Great my ex wife my daughter and my mom and an aunt have all stripped a n d done the vid thingy I love it all.

Great story. Is there any truth in it? Would have been great ato be there🤔😉🫣