by geronimo_appleby
Great imagination. I loved it. Five stars. You might also like one I wrote: http://www.literotica.com/s/russian-wives-ch-01 . Take a look and enjoy. Warm regards.
Well written and lots of hot action, plus a geography lesson. I had to lookup Andaman Sea. Never heard of it before, but then again, I have never been to Asia.
Good luck in the contest.
pure and simple. I think you've taken every possible position and thrown it into the fray.
I enjoyed the way in which you eliminated unnesessary dialogue by having only one woman speak English. It eliminated any of the usual seductive techniques and making the women available as quickly as possible. Again, this is a most unusual tale and told so very well. I shall read and reread this story looking for the many aspects which I'm certain I missed the first time around. Top marks!
My Russian Valentine is a blazing drama, with well-defined characters, written by one of the site's finest and most prolific authors, a great story from start to finish.