All Comments on 'नेहा का परिवार 03'

This story should be in the Non-English section

you probably tried to read a translated version ... which of course is never a good translation ....

and if you do not speak hindi this will make no sense to you - because of differences in cultural behaviour

and yes, this story should be in the non-english section

fairly good story - actually

I have no problem with distasteful criticism. However, this is story in Hindi and is incest based. I think it is being put in right category. If you can not read Hindi then your criticism is irrational.

Translating it in any net based translating site is useless.

I agree this should be in Non-English section and I think that is the category I intended it to be in

That is the way to start a good long erotic story in Hindi.

Thanks and congratulations Seema.

5 Stars

I found this story in 'Other" Literotica site in Hindi section. The tag says it is in Hindi.

Why should Mr Chaser or anyone try to get at the writer about the section and nature of story.

If you can not read Russian do not pick up a book written in Russian.

Really frustrating to see such thoughtless expression of criticism......

Harrie

PS Great going Seema.

Seema, unlike other slam bam Hindi stories posted here you are building it up perfectly. It reads like a seasoned Hindi writer's erotica

Please keep it up.

I am sure many readers are following it but may not be leaving comments.

Thanks for your efforts

mast suruat...........nice mamaji