All Comments on 'On Loan with a Twist'

It became more reasonable and entertaining (believable) once the loving wife shared her loving (almost a wuss) husband with another woman.

Nice job of writting.

Loved the turns this story took...

Fantastic story and great style. I really enjoyed it and while the trio was good adding the fourth made it even better. I will have to check out your other works and look forward to more.

Terrific imagination, well structured. I like nothing better than being under my wife when another guy's fucking her, so those sections of your tale really got to me. The whole story- hot, hot, hot!

Rye and Ginger Ayle

You must have met my wife sometime, you wrote so well about her, except her name is Ruth.

...you must have been writing about loaning out your sister to your brother. You say that sis-in-law is pretty good, then?

Why they bothered to marry is beyond comprehension

He is a good friend to Lightning McQueen.

His name is not a synonym for "matter." And yes, it does matter very much. Get yourself a decent editor. Otherwise a decent story.

to have fancy dance parties in a diner.

"It is a big fancy diner dance at one of the hotels downtown."

thinking of the menu options is hilarious. would chicken fried steak be the featured entrée or would it be biscuits and sausage gravy?

or are only the diners fancy and the hotel is just so, so?

But then, it would be even more special if mater and pater were there.

The story wasn't that great but I was laughing all the way through because of the silly errors. lol

Strange story, but in it there aren't cheating, no disrespect, no humiliation...They were all adults and free to live what they like.

i only wish my husband would loan me out i would go in a minit

I have never been loaned out but we do have dates with others me with my friend and he with his also sometimes together

I loved your story and glad you all still get along so good

Bout what I would expect from Kentucky. We're they blood relatives?