Only Children are the Problem

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Scorpio44a
Scorpio44a
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Sasha held up her hand and said, "Mine too."

Her friend said, "I thought you two were a good match."

Sasha said, "I thought so too, at first."

They moved on and I said, "I thought you were going to say more."

"I almost did. Then I realized how complicated that would potentially make things for all of us. Society isn't quite ready for us."

Silver said, "Especially the only children."

"And fundamentalist Christians." Janice added.

"Amen." We all agreed.

After breakfast we went home. We sat in the living room and talked. While we talked we touched, snuggled and engaged in gentle foreplay for hours. Loving four women who also love each other was pure pleasure for all of us. I was totally comfortable with how the time and affection was shared. Jealousy wasn't there. There was no reason for it to show up.

We ate lunch at home. By dinner we wanted to go out. Neither of my sisters has ever been big on getting all dressed up, so neither brought a fancy dress. I was pretty sure all four could wear each other's clothes. Some might be a little tighter on Joan than she might like and some of Silver's dresses were a little short looking with Sasha's long legs sticking out but we opted for casual and went to Island's. Then we walked down by the marina.

We were home and in bed again by eleven.

When we took my sisters back to the airport I had spent a large portion of the weekend in bed and I needed a nap. As Joan and Janice walked away from us Sasha said, "You walk funny." My sisters laughed. Our vacations had been planned for October. I was pretty sure this marriage would last.

Yesterday my boss introduced me to the guy I'll be sharing an office with. By the time the introductions were over I felt badly for him. He's an only child.

Scorpio44a
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inka2222inka22224 months ago

Sorry, 1 star and I wish I could give -100. The piece of shit sasha married a guy, LIED to him about fucking her sister, THEN sprung that on him as a surprise AFTER being married, then went and cheated on him BEFORE divorcing him. Didn't bother reading the rest but I bet she cleaned him out in divorce too, being the "empathetic", "ethical" person she thinks she is. A fair and deserving ending would be HER dying of MS, and "silver" cheating on the asswipe who was OK fucking a married woman.

skruff101skruff101over 2 years ago

Adolescent schoolboy fantasy on steroids (five to a bed, not the incest…but you never know).

MasterpuppyMasterpuppyabout 3 years ago
I was

Raised a only child but I share really well so that's not the problem

QuintiusQuintiusover 4 years ago
Liked the beginning...

... but felt it got a bit generic after Sasha joined them. Not in the type of content but the descriptions and general actions of the characters. The women just kind of blended, all having the same sorts of reactions and impulses, senses of humor and methods of teasing. It was no longer a special story about Roger and Silver and how they fell in love in a whirlwind, it was just a generic polyamory incest story where one guy got to fuck two pairs of sisters. It didn't much matter which one was speaking, fucking, eating pussy, etc... They were interchangeable. "Which one was Joan? Eh, guess it doesn't really matter. They're even so similar they can wear one another's clothes."

So, yeah. The story had five stars when it was just Roger and Silver, doing unique things, reveling in their new relationship, discovering how compatible they both were. Went down to four when Sasha decided to just dump her husband and move in with her sister and new fiance. Went even further down when Roger announced he fucked his sisters regularly and their husbands conveniently didn't care. Says a lot for those relationships. Once they all got into bed together it all became very boring. The thing that made Roger and Silver work so well was how unique and spontaneous and joyful their new relationship was. Having the sisters like Silver and Sasha like Roger was a nice touch. Having them join in drowned out what made Roger and Silver exceptional together.

This isn't a complaint about polyamorous or incestuous content, it's an expression of disappointment at the quality of the storytelling. Once the other sisters were added to the story Scorpio44a failed to keep the relationship between Roger and Silver the focus of the story. By leeching the uniqueness created during their first date and through their continuing relationship he turned it into just another harem-esque fantasy stroke story. That's a damned shame.

Arc2456Arc2456about 5 years ago
Only child

I would have had a sister but my mother lost her. I have always missed the fact I never had the chance to know her. Being an only child really sucks sometimes!

Loved the story.

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