All Comments on 'Pakistani Zara Liberated Ch. 01'

Very nice and detailed story line! When will be the next part coming??

Hi HotPaki, aap ki story parhi, yaar really maza aa gaya, aisi haqeeqat say qareeb story or miaan biwi kay betakalluf discission kum hi log likh paaatay hain. App nay toh kamal kar diya. Aisa lag raha tha kay yeh kahani nahi haqeeqat hay or saamnay ho raha hay. Magar aap nay kuchh or nahi likha, kya busy ho gaye? time nahi mila? Yaar main aap say raabta rakhna chahta hoon. Main male hoon, pakistani hoon, canada main rehta hoon, shadi shuda hoon, bachay hain. Lagta hay meri or aap ki fantasies milti hain toh socha kay share karain. Agar aap comfortable hon to message karain, I would love to chat with you. Agar interested na bhi hon toh aik line likh kar yeh bata dije ga. Thanks

Ch 02 kithe hai...

Hi, I read your story again and loved your story as it is very well written and the story is interesting too. Just that since it is written in roman urdu I did not enjoy reading it as much. Not that I don't like urdu stories, actually I do, just that roman urdu is not my thing. Do you mind if I translate it into English? I am a mature Pakistani male, married with kids living in Canada for some time. I had tried to write to you earlier as well but did not get any response.

Mujhay kisi nay jawab toh diya magar pata nahi kis nay, kioon kay us jawab main literotica ka userr name ya kahani ka naam nahi likha or phir email address bhi kaam nahi kar raha. agar wo aap thay ya theen toh pls dobara jawab dain or koi active email use karain. thanks