Pleasure Upon Request

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Doug sighed once she was gone. "I'm a lucky man," he said, and I nodded.

"Yes, Doug," I agreed, "you are."

It was then that the first flicker crossed his face, though I'll admit, this time I missed it. "Thank you, Richard," he said quietly, looking at me.

"You're welcome," I said reflexively, and when silence followed, I turned to my friend and saw the look in his eyes, and realized where we were and where this was going. I lowered my voice and said again, differently, "You're welcome."

Doug was quiet a long moment, but when he spoke, there was strength in his voice. "I know it was a strange situation to find yourself in, and I know we haven't talked about it since then, sort of letting it lie, but it was one of the best weekends of my life, and I want to thank you for it."

For once, I did not really know what to say. "You're welcome," I said again.

Doug chuckled. "It's alright," he told me. "You can talk about it. I won't get upset. I let you fuck my wife, remember? Twice, actually. There's not a whole lot to get upset about."

I let out a breath I did not realize I'd been keeping. In truth, I think I'd been keeping it there for six weeks. "Good!" I said, a little too loudly, then laughed myself. "I'd been a little worried about how you would be, you know, as time passed."

He nodded knowingly. "Totally fine," he said. "It's what I wanted. It's what I needed. Sadie and I have never been better, actually." He grinned. "She can't stop talking about it, you know. That weekend totally rocked her world."

Now I really did not know what to say. This time, I didn't even try. Thankfully, however, the entrance once more of the woman in question saved me like a bell at the end of class.

"My nose is itching," Sadie said from the doorway behind us, and we turned to find her standing there with her hands on her hips and a stern sort of expression on her face.

I was concerned, but Doug merely smiled. "It should be," he said. "We finally get around to talking about our weekend, and you interrupt us. You need to apologize, I think."

She sashayed into the room and came around to stand before us. She was smiling now, and Doug was smiling, and there was something going on between the two of them that I could not even begin to understand.

"Apologize?" she said tartly. "I think not."

Doug's smile vanished. "Apologize, Sadie," he said. His voice was stronger and sterner than I had ever heard it before.

Sadie turned to me, smile gone, eyes lowered bashfully, and said, "I'm sorry, Richard."

My mouth opened, but no words came out.

The corners of the woman's mouth quivered, but she did not smile. She turned instead to her husband and said, "Something else itches, Douglas."

Doug was staring at the television screen. "I can't be bothered right now, whore," he said, and I nearly fell off the couch. "See if Ricky wants to help."

Sadie turned to me, and as she did so, reached down and stripped the sundress off her body, leaving her fully nude where she stood before me.

It was a body I remembered well: long legs, lean waist, flat stomach, exquisite breasts as fleshy and firm as any I'd ever had the pleasure of feeling, and a soft downy swath of golden curls set above the sacred spot between her legs. She was, in a word, gorgeous.

"Will you scratch my itch, Richard?" she cooed softly.

I looked at Sadie, I looked at Doug, I looked at the ceiling, and then my eyes went back to the woman, who was smiling that unbelievably sexy smile of hers.

"Sure," I said, which is when Sadie climbed onto the couch and planted her juicy pink pussy right on top of my face.

You're welcome, indeed.

<<<End of Pleasure Upon Request by Jack and Josephine Cutter. Future stories starring some or all of these characters might also be forthcoming based upon response and demand. Certain characters featured herein may also be found in other works by the authors, published or forthcoming. Email feedback to the address in our profile.>>>

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
MINORITY OPINION

It started with a pet peeve of mine -- in two ways.

First, it was pre-announced that he was going to do his friend's wife.

Second, his first encounter with Alyssa is announced as over; then he backtracks to relate/describe the encounter.

To me, this is akin to giving away part of the story by someone telling me portions that are well in advance of where I'm reading.

I want to lead up to events, not be told the outcome before its place in the story.

And I rarely like backtracking. Possibly for explanation, but not the storyline itself.

I have liked cuckold stories, but only if respectful and, especially only if from the viewpoint of the man who does the cuckold's wife. (I try to stay away from stories from the cuckold's point of view. Inconsistently, I like cuckquean stories.). So this one should have done it for me. Somehow, it did not. Two factors may have contributed to my negativity. (OK three, counting souring of my attitude at the start, by the pre-announcing and backtracking.)

One, it was verbose. Just too many words/too much elaboration to convey a point or action.

Related to that, I got the feeling the author was proud of his linguistic ability/vocabulary and also -- through the protagonist -- of his sexual skill. Gave off a feeling of a bit of arrogance (the word that came to me as I read it).

On the other hand, I was flabbergasted that the usually scathing Harry in Virginia had not even one negative in his comment.

Makes me wonder if I'm just in a too negative mentality today.

Unrelated, there were at least two instances where the first person narrator slipped into third person.

Here's an example from the middle of page 7.

"I growled loudly from the exquisite oral abilities of the sultry woman on her knees before me, and he could feel myself losing control."

The sentence correctly uses "I" and "me," but inconsistently switches to "he," after which switching back to first person "myself."

Since I normally like stories with this kind of plot, this one turned out to be somewhat disappointing.

On the positive, the build-up to Doug finally unveiling his proposal/request, including Sadie warning him, was nicely done.

Also, having the actual major encounter at a separate, getaway venue was a nice touch.

Paul in Oklahoma

maddictmaddictalmost 8 years ago
Intense.

Sunday football,, beer and a women we both are comfortable with. Three can be as close as two if we tried this all together. A fast and fine eight pages.

jurasickjurasickabout 9 years ago
Incredible writing

I've read this story several times and it's incredible how good it is each time. I'm not sure if either of you write any more but am fervently hoping that is still the case. Please add more about these characters. I particularly find it fascinating that this story shows shades of both the female and male perspectives in the writing, a truly unique style of storytelling.

NastranaNastranaabout 11 years ago
tension and elegance

Well done indeed, a well crafted story that brings over true eroticism with believable situations and a poetic style.

More please....

jkthekatjkthekatover 11 years ago
I have a new favorite!!

Ditto to all the positive comments-loved the flow! Would love more please

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