All Comments on 'Rahul aur Pooja ki Kahani'

Dear Rahul,

I loved the way you described the whole story. It was wonderful and meets my five star rating. Such stories from Indian authors are very rare. Majority of Indian authors are crass and not sensitive to women. There is also naivety in their writing. Indian stories are closer to my heart because there is an element of surprise, reluctance, persuasion etc. which are essential part of the story. Sadly most of these elements are missing in westerner's storiesss although they write better.

Please let me congratulate you and compliment you for spending so much effort in writing so well.

I also invite you to be my friend and read some of my stories in this and some other portals. I would particularly like you to read: बड़ी मुश्किल से बीबी को तैयार किया in literotica.com. Link is https://other.literotica.com/s/badi-mushkil-se-biwi-ko-taiyaar-kiya

My best wishes

Raj - iloveall

lovely

Nice story

Please write more. This is fucking hot story.

Ek dum hot series hai. Mein poori detail may padi.. ithna maza aaya ki I was feeling like it is happening to me. Do keep writing more and more :) I loved it.

बहुत डेंजर कहानी

राहुल का सपना पुरा हुआ

मुस्लिम लंड से चुदना आसान नही फिर भी पती के सामने पुजा ने वो कर के दिखाया

रश्मी की चुदाई कब होगी मुस्लिम लंड से

very hot and gripping story. Your way of writing is highly vivid. Wonderful narration. I wish you would have continued with 2nd part. but this seems to be so complete in itself.

A really well narrated and intimate love between husband and wife. The wife trusts her husband and agrees to do anything to please him. A true Indian wife is obeys her husband and even ready be a raandi for his pleasure.

I like to see my wife like a pathivratha raandi. - Suckher

Very well told story Dehw. I could almost Pooja in my mind and feel her ehat.

Try this one:

https://www.literotica.com/s/circle-of-eight

I wrote that a long time ago in a different Avatar.

Awesome...need to have part 2 with tailor.