All Comments on 'Saturday Afternoon'

How fun. Interesting.

How about moving this to Non Consensual, or even BD/SM?

I liked it. Easy to read and I liked the writing style. I was expecting a brother and sister scenario because so many of them are but I like that the reveal at the end was mother and son to make a little difference in the ratio of story type. easy four out of five from me.

Fantastic tale of lust and love.

Well delivered with your wonderful surprise ending . . . Who knew they had a bar ?

There are several stories like this one here. Come for the sex; stay for the mystery twist. Always hot and sexy. Nice job.

Nice twist! Up until the last line I was thinking not bad, but kind of generic, nothing special here, then bam!

Cool thing is since its so short, its easy to do an immediate second read through, and now knowing this is his mother? Good job.

At least it was rather short, thank goodness.

Thank you for the posts. I couldn't make it BDSM because I/T trumps every other category.

WHAM BAM....it's over

The prequel was soo good! I am glad that I stumbled upon it first because it made this story more than the usual dick up the ass. I look forward to more stories from you.

Clever!

You should write more.