All Comments on 'Show and Tell'

This is a fun great story!

Well told and vivid!

I loved it!--

You conveyed nicely a mix of lust, curiosity and excitement.

Keep on writing!

This one ended too soon. What happened to Jen's story? What about her pree marriage escapades?

Have to say that was so fun i joined in. Orgasmic!

Having fun in the sun. A mutual masturbation scene is described with sly humour and raunchy detail.

You described a very erotic situation expertly. I enjoy your writing.