All Comments on 'Sis's Anal Awakening'

Nice effort. You could've drawn it out a little with a little teasing. Also, describe the acts in a more detailed way. Read Sara's road trip by youbadboy. That one is the best story i've ever read. Keep on writing..

This is a good start but it does have several problems. First off, You started by calling the sister Michelle and then changed her name mid story to Melissa. You also had a few spelling errors that i stumbled over, though not so many that i found it too distracting.

The main thing I think your story is missing is that despite your writing that the characters are siblings, I didn't get an actual sense of the taboo. You could simply not mention them being sibling and this story would be about roommates without any other alterations.

Why was Melissa so comfortable talking to her brother about sex? Were they always close or is that something that developed as they became adults?

Why did neither John nor Melissa feel much guilt about what they were doing? Had they been harboring secret feelings over time that eroded that guilt away a long time ago or did they simply not feel sibling sex was a big deal?

We as the readers take our cue from the characters on how to feel. If they don't feel like incest is a big deal then we don't feel it either which makes reading an incest story kinda pointless.

Very good story... more please...

really liked your story.

A little dull and simplistic, but realistic too, I think

It's a very good story! I liked how the erotic tension was created, before the real sexual scenes. I believe some teasing events would add to the story. Things like: One day his sister would come to John in a miniskirt or in a bikini, saying she has just painted her nails so she couldn't do it herself, and then she would ask him to fix her wedging panties or bikini bottoms. Or John and his sister are sitting on the couch while their mom and dad who come home a little later then usual are having diner on a table behind the couch. Still sitting John's sister turns around to talk to her mom and dad and she lifts her skirt, exposing her ass to John who starts to fondle it. Their parents continue the conversation unaware of what is happening on the couch.

next chapter ASAP

Needed more drama and maybe a part where the mom walks in

glad there wasn't a lot of build-up, to me it's more realistic that it would occur as written, which could then turn into something else if they wanted it to-nicely done

Great read thanks for sharing.

Needs a follow up

I need more. This is great. Anal is a wonderful alternative to vaginal penetration IF the woman can get off that way. Some can, some can't. But I think you need to give us more in this one.

In Indian families big asses is criteria for marriage. My mom, Aunts are ass queens.

Sangita, my cousin is also a ass queen, giving hard on to me and my friends.

One day I was doing some garden work till dark. And she entered room, closed it and proceeded to change her uniform.

She removed it and was standing in bra and panty. Her red panty was a tight fit and her ass was nice. After observing herself for some time she removed it and fondling her ass and cunt. Slowly she progressed to masturbation. And watching her I was jerking off. At one moment she looked at me and message was passed.

Some days later she asked me to drop her at a friend's house. We went and while returning she kissed my earlobe. I stopped at a public park where we kissed more and naturally I fondled her smooth round Ass.

Knowing I liked it she allowed me to do it and later I kissed her v of cunt above jeans.

This went on for a month with more freedom and then we made love in house with ass fuck.

Anal awakening is always beneficial for cousins

I WISH THAT WAS ME.I WOULD SUCK HIM OFF.LICK HIS ASS .HAVE HIM FUCK ME REAL GOOD.THEN SUCK HIS COCK CLEAN.BECAUSE I LOVE SUCKING COCKS. FROM A COCK LOVING FAGGOT!!!!

My sister and I got on very well from a young age. I was older than her,by 2 years. Her boyfriends would soon discover what a great fuck she was and she seemed to have a lot of boy friends. The reason, at a young age we had started to fuck. We were messing around in my bedroom when out of the blue she said Juile Fennel told me her brother lets her touch his cock. I looked a bit shocked but played it cool and said well you can touch mine if you like. She looked at me, I just pulled my shorts down, go on and she did. Of course I started to get hard, she just held it. I put my hand around hers, moving it up and down, she got the hang of it and I was soon shooting my cum into the air. That started it, she was soon blowing me, Julie Fennel told her she did that to her brother, and she couldn't get enough. I got to lick her pussy and my sister knew what an orgasm was at a young age. What else did Julie Fennel tell you. Well, her brother fucks her, I knew Jack, he was a lot older, I said we cant do that unless we have a condom. Well, the next day, she was blowing me, I had my tongue in her pussy, she was moaning, she moved off me and tried to put my cock in her pussy, I kept pushing her back, no way, please, no, I need to feel what it is like. I want to feel your cock in me, I pushed her off, wait, I went and got baby oil from the bathroom, I wanted to fuck her as well. Lay down, she didn't hesitate, I covered my cock in oil, I moved between her legs, rubbed my cock up and down her very wet pussy, then lowered my cock against her ass, I watched her eyes when she realized I was going to push my cock into her bum and as I did so, I watched her face, it took some time but I was finally in her and I started to fuck her. I didn't last long, it felt so good, my cum was soon shooting into her ass, her pussy was dripping, I stayed in her and it wasn't long before I was again fucking her ass, a bit easier this time and I lasted longer. You know what, she orgasmed as I fucked her, causing my cum to shoot deep into her. That was the beginning, I fucked her ass at every opportunity, she was insatiable. Julie Fennel also got very friendly with me, she would come home with my sister sometimes. We got to talking, I hadn't noticed how much she had grown up, I soon had her mouth around my cock. To my surprise she said to me, do what you do to Lorraine, what, well she told me you put your cock in her , you know, what, well her bottom. I soon had my cock inside Julies tight hole, she made more noise than my sister but I filled her ass with my cum. She wasn't that keen on anal but she really liked my cock inside her pussy telling me I felt bigger inside than her her brother. My sister and I kept fucking for nearly 5 years, sometimes she would come home late after going out with one of her boyfriends and she would slip into my bedroom, wrap her lips around my cock and then lay beside me as I pushed my cock up into her ass. Sometimes I would slide in really easily I knew then I wasn't the only one spraying her rectum with cum. Then it stopped, she met a guy called Rob, he was really nice, I was happy for her. We played squash against each other and that was when I discovered why she was happy. In the shower, he was half my size again, no wonder she didn't bother with me again. So it was I just had to do with Julie Fennels willing pussy and every so often her not so willing ass.

You don't get a hangover from pot...

Yeah, no hangover from pot, but they were drinking wine too. Besides.... was that really what caught your focus in the story?

Love my little sisters big ass it's all most oversized for her size and age she loves for me fuck her in it for hours and fill it with cumm and toys

I would love to fuck my sister in the ass, maybe one day I will

Dude I hope you write more these stories make me cum so fast

ass, lick it, get fucked in it, virtually anything

Wish i could fuck my sister that hard... I fucking love her ass much

This is the best incest story I've ever read! I sincerely hope there's a sequel!

Pretty god damn good

Loved the story, but not terribly original. I mean, I can't even begin to say how many times I have smoked weed and found my finger up an asshole: my sister's ass, my mother's ass, my grandfather's ass, my dog's ass, hell I even found my finger up a bonobo's ass at the zoo... Must be a Southern thing.

Reasonable premise.

But lacks details. He oiled up his cock. He inserted in her asshole. No trepidation. No going slow. Simply oil up insert. Boom.

Sex? Sure. Erotic? Nope. Not to me anyway.

Three stars.

Great story. Reminds me of my experiences with my sister. We started young and did everything. This guy was lucky she wanted an ass fuck. I imagine it went on for awhile. I ended with my sister when she got married.

I thought it was extremely hot. It's really nice when brother and sister can get along like that. I can't imagine what it would be like to have a sister that would be so willing to give you her ass to f***. I sure hope she continues to give it to you as you get older.

This was good enough to get my nut! I would have LOVED to done my sister in the ass. And there's so much room now for more chapters. I know you were away for about 10 years, but are back now. Let's get this going again.

I started wearing a rubber except for special times, like by B-day-made clean-up a lot easier for her, plus she didn't have to perch on the can trying to get rid of it all

plus putting a towel, or even two down, helps