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I would have skipped my own funeral for that.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoInteresting premise.
Nicely written.
Sex scenes seem to have needed to be slower paced. Needed more details. Needed more step-by-step. For example, when she jerked him off he suggested she do it with both hands as in a scene in the movie. To me, at least, it's have been more erotic if she started with one hand for a while while he enjoyed it and she enjoyed seeing/hearing his enjoyment. Then either he or she could have suggested trying with two hands as in the movie.
Four stars.
dallasgentleman020almost 7 years agoCharacters were very believable and situation was accurate for that time period.
Another winner, Ken
TheDreamGirlover 8 years agoThat was beautiful. It was both incredibly sexy and romantic. As a member of the itty bitty titty committee, I feel a lot better about myself too. It was exceedingly well written, you should consider making this your day job. As an avid reader, I'd buy your books.
KenNicottiiover 8 years agoAuthorMany thanks to all those who have viewed, voted, favorited, and commented. When I first laid out the basic story, I had it ending when the women said goodnight. The phone call scene the next day was added much later, and I now realize it has teed up expectations for another chapter: the sunbathing on Sunday and a return to The Regent the following weekend. Rest assured, that chapter will be written eventually; but first, I need to complete several other stories before I tackle this sequel. Your patience will be rewarded.
