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lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyalmost 12 years ago
I like the story so far...

My only complaint is that the chapters are very short. I am intrigued and want to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I want more!

Finally a story with some intelligence. I also like that the master isn't a brute.

sexJDeesexJDeealmost 12 years ago

Where's the rest of it? This isn't a cliff-hanger; it is incomplete. Please finish it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

more, please?

Thrawn11494Thrawn11494almost 12 years ago
Sounds like me

It's odd that David sounds a lot like me. Bewitched and in control at the same time. I kind of hope they end up falling in love. Molto bene!

HoneySubHoneySubover 11 years ago
Mouthwatering

Loved this... A very stimulating Read;)

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