All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 09'

This is getting better and better...

Amazing. My favourite series. I keep looking everyday for when you post another story. Keep going! :D

It probably is just a personal preference, but I dislike it when a Dom makes it so a sub will disobey. It seems like a cruel game to me, especially when the sub is trained to want to please the Dom. If someone likes to see if a individual would respond to punishment, then they shouldn't set them up for failure. It makes trust an issue.

I absolutely adore this story. I really enjoy the relationship that the two characters share. David himself such an absolutely wonderful master. I love how patient and kind he is with her while showing her all of the various different things that he wants her to do. I really like that instead of forcing her to just comply, he is trying to ease her into her new way of life so it's not only pleasurable for him but for her as well.

As for the comment above about him setting her up to disobey and be punished I don't necessarily agree with you. She is told by him to not pleasure herself under any circumstance so therefore even if he leaves out a toy in which could be used for her personal pleasure she should still know to obey his order to not use it without his permission. As for your comment about her wanting to please him she should please him by obeying his commands and not giving into temptation even if it's right there in front of her.

Overall I absolutely love this series and the way that it's going so far. I can't wait to read the rest :-)

Love this story. Is it possible to sell it in itunes?