All Comments on 'Suburban Sweetheart'

I really enjoyed this story, its sexy, beautifully written, and a fascinating concept that gives hope to all those dowdy middle aged women amongst us! Can't wait for Part 2...

Outstanding story, oc.....

As a middle aged female I think I would die and go to heaven if this scenario happened to me.....If you are as good in real life as you are in text then there must be some lucky ladies out there...

From the first paragraph ... I wanted to know more about the lady on the train. Yours was the most stirring description of a man licking a woman that I've ever read. Thank you so much for sharing ... I'm sure I'll read this one again and again.

Good job, OC! Keep writing.

Boo

An unusual story, but beautifully written amd very erotic. congratulations and thanks for writing. the Ct Yankee

Orangecurious,

Oh my goodness! What a sensory journey for these two strangers. You did a wonderful job! I look forward to another story from you.

*hugs*

Tiggy

Thanks for a lovely and hot buildup that's so much better to read than all the slam-bam stories here. Not that I don't like slam-bam sex, but over and over again? So often I find myself wishing and trolling to find a nice well written piece that sounds real. This sounds real, feels real and I think is real! Can't wait for the next one! Thanks again! PS, How come only the gals leave their handles here...?

so detailed and so sexy..not like a lot of stories...the real pleasure and curiosity in the woman's body is sooo sexy.Fab M

Deftly drawn characters and an actual plot!

*applause*

OC,

that story was amazing it had me from the start wanting more and more and as i read on u gave that to me as a reader, totally satisfied and got more than i expected. excellent work oc.

sparkle5

Such a loving,real feel to the story. I love the fact that it is so languid and sustained.

OrangeCurious, it's refreshing to find a well-written story that demonstrates the joys of bringing a woman off multiple times, and perhaps with an intensity she's never experienced before. If you make love like you write, you should have some very happy female friends. I can't wait to read more. Gary

Love the playful aspect and the gentle build, felt very initmate.