All Comments on 'The Office Vamp'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Goodbye Beverley

A great story (100% like it)up until the last line. The story line wasn't brought to a close, it was executed!! It was far too abrupt as if the author had run out of things to write about.

An Awful CadAn Awful Cadabout 19 years ago
Odd Ending But Good

I liked the rest of it, but the ending did make me do a double take.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I loved the story

the build up and the history, but the ending was a little strange...your stories show intelligence and a willing to do more than just egg on masturbation. Not a stroke story but something to savor more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Crap

Just look at the title of my comment

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