by Egglime
Not a bad 1st impression. If you need any help getting the rest to the finish line I would love to assist. Either way I eagerly await your next story
this was good but please before you tackle all those draft, please finish corruption.
5 STARS
Love it! This sums up women of today to a tee, act all shy and proper with the boyfriend or guy their crushing on and fucks shitheads like themselves on the side. Im yet to met a faithful women under 80 so I never feel bad about being a nice guy to my bitch and cheating behind her back.
Oh my gosh! I love this! I always read ntr hentai manga and I'm haply I could read a short novel version. This is wonderful! Keep up the good work. This is effing hot and wild and immorally good!
Dear god, so dark, I love it, I know this probably doesn't have a chapter 2 and 3 but I would love that, the oblivious boyfriend, the more love he shows the more depraved her GF gets.
I loved your who would've guessed story, but a story about a faithless woman unable to resist a huge dick attached to a huge dick holds no appeal or eroticism. Add on the lack of resolution... 2*, and that's generous.