All Comments on 'The Understanding'

but who is George? Is that Jerry, and you lost track of the names?

He spoke one very true sentence. He is a pathetic loser! When describing the original threesome, his thoughts were way too clear not to be able to speak or get up and put a stop to the bullshit! Not my cup of tea!

well written and hot. Erotic and sensual, even though I'm not much on the sharing and switching of marital partners...this was enjoyable.

versatile writer. What stories I’ve read so far have covered a multitude of sexual subjects. All have been handled well concerning the emotional impact of the situations on the participants involved. Keep up the good work, a fan always.

You are one hell of a good writer.

what wrong with this picture.swapping and they aren't married.the wife got carried away and the hubby was a wimp.

The husband is a fool and a wimp, Stephanie is a whore and needs to be fucked with a baseball bat wrapped with barbed wire, that should cure her nasty itch forever.

if she was ever fully in love with mike she would have been aware that he was having trouble with what she was starting & gone to him to talk about it before having sex in any form with judy or jerry. this just screams to me that she realy just does not care about mike just about herself that his depression didn't bother her or was not even noticed for weeks reinforces my belief that this relationship should not continue.

jesus this one really sucks

just another lousy wimp whore/cunt/slut story

ditto to earlier comments. wife was a heartless ho, husband was a light weight loser. lucky the wife was smart enough to give her husband 'round two' or it'd really suck ass.

Not one single likable character. Plus, the story kept contradicting itself.

in common. Similar to the "jackass' Nobel peace [OMG, they give those away without any rational thought whatsoever] prizes, they seems to come from a common source - Cracker Jacks, cheap and irrelevant in the big picture of reality. Interesting enough, this author is absent for a few years and suddenly re-surfaces with a "mind control" story. Hmmm, it is really the author or another bonnietaylor & wantwhitewomen want-to-be? Time will tell.

Mike may have found that story ok, but lacking. Words to justify and compound. If thre was the intent for anything including the coupling, left out husband would have been acknowledged. Jerry was held in such disdain, choke

Mike's behaviour on the evening of the swapping might have been not consequent, but a really loving partner would not have gone farther sensing the conflicting emotions of the other. And her rigtheous reaction afterwards shows she does not love him - love means understanding and not just fucking.

Sorry, this one really sucked. He caved in when she accused him of wanting her friend. Wanting and having are two different things.

It should have been obvious to her that her husband was not involved in the sex. She never should have even given the guy head if her husband was not participating.

And he even though he brought up her screaming during sex, he never made her explain what she had said. This guy is a wimp and she is going to turn him into a full-blown cuckold.

I guess wimps and cuckolds will like this story. Not so much for me.

Can't stop what happened to your spouse because you're too drunk?

What a pathetic excuse. Don't drink anything you can't handle.

Babylonian for "cuckold"

pure bullshit, she manipulated him first time and has done it again, he is a stupid cuck

when blackmail and collusion is involved. TK U MLJ LV NV

Only assholes in this story. There should be a section called "Total Assholes." What do you think? I vote yea

You'll be a shoe-in for president of said category. Asshole.

Fuck you you cuck asshole.

YOUR MOTHER

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA

Life goes on in slutsville

-the fuck is George?

I'm really sick of reading your stories! Why are all of your men dumb fucking wimps? Is that how you are in real life? Must be because the only kind of men you seem to write about are fucking pussies. I guess it is art imitating life huh! Loser!!!

Enjoyed the writing! As per the comment by Anonymous we found it strange that he wrote that he was sick of reading your stories. The question begs to be asked: Why does he continue to do so? So he can leave more negative comments?

Mike should get revenge on his bitch ass wife for treating him like shit and blaming his for the threesome. He should have an affair of a long time with the woman he really wanted to have Judy.

sorry did i miss something?, was he drugged?, he was aware of all going on around him, but unable to move or speak?, what a croc of shit.

Bullshit! The whore cheated, he did not participate, she did an all night threesome and wow he got a hand job.

She was too comfortable with it, she has done it before.

Trying to reclaim his pussy is not forgiveness.

Just a wimp cuckie story.

This is a pretty good story.

I'm always amused by the Anonymice who leave intolerant, boneheaded remarks under cover of darkness. At least have the balls to identify yourself.

Chastity, if you see this, I'd like to discuss it with you!

Gary13

ignorant children should be kept off the site

There is a big difference between cheating and and having an understanding. If you don't like swinging or sharing, don't read the damn story!

That being said she was selfish because in this instance it was more about her getting hers as opposed to having an experience together. So she "owes" him a threesome with Judy.

this ONE STAR crap for willing cuck's enjoyment of wildone's auto-bio.

1*

She's a cheating, self-centered slut. And she's playing him. He finally woke up to her demeaning and humiliating him. She's toast.

Another useless cuck.

then blames him, never occurred to her to say no..............

She is making love to another woman and letting another man fuck while her husband is ignored and then she screams:

"Oh yeah, fuck me. Oh god, fuck me as hard as you can. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. Oh God, I've never been fucked like this before. Don't stop. Please don't stop. Oh yeah." On and on she encouraged Jerry to fuck her. "Oh fuck this is good."

Then when they are arguing about what happened and why he is so resentful that she never responded like that to him, he is the one to apologise!! :

"I’m so sorry for hurting you. I'll do anything for you. Anything you want."

"I'm sorry baby, really. What can I do for you to make it up. Tell what to do to clean up this mess. I'm so sorry. Please forgive me."

Why should he be the one to apologise when she cheated on him and treated her lover better than her husband.

YOU CANNOT BE SERIOUS WHAT A FUCKING WIMP.

not sure what I saw in this. She never once tried to dissuade him of the notion that Jerry was better than him. She says she didn't even like him, and yet she hints at bringing him back.i didn't hear anything on the phone to indicate Judy was coming alone. And the round two line? I don't buy it. Round two means going again. Since hubby didn't go round one, they couldn't have been referring to him. Of course, this guy getting excited at the thought of Jerry or George coming back means he's a cuck.

I do agree with part of the comments, there was no communications going on at all, someone gave him enough booze so he couldn't play. then after a time the wife gets pissed off saying something has to be done. If she was going to give him one of his stated fantasies, don't you think she would have told him, prepared him(not too much booze)? as to what happened after the event, a time period exists. later we find out that she has obviously discussed the issues with her friend, but we are not told what was said. did he want to be a cuckold? we were not told either way. there is a lot that was not stated in the story, and open to the light innuendoes. They seem happy now, so great.

An error in naming or a slip of the tougue? This could develop into a longer story. Don't know how such a mistake could've been made, unless it was on purpose.

she cheated plain and simple.

She showed no remorse

She SAID they didnt have sex all nite but.....

Then she easily talks about visiting with the guy again.

Poor man needs a new wife badly. this one is almost out the door.

invaulantry cuckolded.

who the fuck is george?

Get a divorce and find someone who might be more loyal to a marriage.

Mike, so a sad excuse for a male. No man card for this guy.

what a pussy of a man. a real dumb cuck.

lowlifes deserve each other. 1*

Why is she calling him names like pathetic and an asshole if the goal is to patch things up? How does it become only his fault and he is aplogizing? It makes no sense at all.

Inconsistent and nonsensicial.

But found some real fag cuck shit. I thought this author was supposed to be good?

Good? Her stories are about the fantasy these worthless cunts have, that when people figure out who they are, they will still want to have anything to do with these pieces of shit.

Who the fuck is George?

drugged and slowly but surely turned into their cuckold.

don't know if thats what the author intended but thats how it looks. i see pegging and creampies in his future unless he wises up.

I have to agree with the group that believes he was drugged and has been manipulated into this swinger style.

It's an interesting plot but could have been approached differently.

If if she didn't catch Jerry spiking the drink, even if Jerry/Judy never told her what they were going to do, Steph was paying attention to Mike and saw he was immobile, and crying. And failure to respond to a "may I" doesn't mean yes.

She should have had his back, and she didn't do a thing to prevent/rescue him.

And now George (from Tale of the Tape?) enters out of the blue.

Next thing you know, Michael is going to wake up taped to chair with a ball gag in his mouth, and choke to death from inattention while he cries his eyes out and his nose plugs solid.

With a spouse like Stephanie, who needs enemies?

5 stars.

My.least favorite of your stories. Don't care wiretapping of any nature, especially drug induced.

It sucked!

Is George?

Dude's upset 'cause his old lady got herself into a threesome with another couple, in their own bed, without him being at all involve in it.

They eventually talked it out, pledged themselves once again to each other and promised to communicate better, in the future. It's good...

But then, the wife once again mentioned wanting them to still fuck around outside of their marriage, and, instead of being as upset as he was after theirs first time swapping when to hell FOR HIM, after going thought all the feelings of hurt betray this experience left him with...

The mere thought of doing it again make him cum in her hand?

Yeah, sorry - that doesn't compute.

Unless, of course, he's a closet cuck, which still doesn't add up with how he was portrait throughout this tale. Around here, there's somethings that will tank your rating on a story, but the two biggest ones are the subject matter - duh! - and the inconsistency of the characters. Sure, Mike pushed Stephanie to open herself up sexually, but, given his reactions to how his wife took to it, it's impossible to believe he would be this OK with the idea that she would, once again, fuck another man again. If anything, his cock should have went soft at Steph's suggestion.

So, ultimately, I just don't buy that ending... which, ultimately, tank the whole project. You fucked up on the landing, author... too bad.

Pathetic!

wish there was a warning about fetish cuckolding. the LW under this one wasn't, so thought this one wasn't, boy was i wrong lol just ew

Sorry, this is a stupid cuck story. How disappointing it had the hallmarks of a good story but went south way too quickly and ended up being shit.

There was so much you could’ve done with this tale, but of all the paths available you took the worst one imaginable.

Just understand, 90% of men are not wired this way and do not like these stories.

Was a pathetic cuck wimp slut story. Husband is a sick wimp and wife is your typical slut. Nothing to like about the characters or the story.

She did cheat on him, and didn't include him. No concern for him at all. And he forgives way too easily. And who the hell is George ?

What kind of loser would get too drunk to fuck?

Probably the same loser who would share his husbandly territory. The other option is he married a fat slob who has money and he doesn't want to lose his free ride because he is too lazy to get a job. Her friend is slightly more attractive and he needs the variation just to get hard. Cottage cheese takes on a new meaning in his life

Smokepole

I liked it - no ridiculous big cock stuff, no humiliation, no male bi stuff, nobody did anything to Mike in his drunken state, etc... Who goes into a swapping situation and gets so hammered that not only can't he perform; but, he blacks out. There was nothing in the story to suggest that somebody drugged him. I mean really...

He's the one who was pushing the idea, he screws up, they have two weeks of great sex afterwards, and then all of a sudden he's upset. If there's a next time, don't get so fucking hammered that he can't even pronounce words. At least he and his loving wife reconciled and hopefully learned from it!

Pathetic cuck sh*t.

She literally did cheat on him, and she turned it back on him.

At least he didnt cry like the little bitch he is when he apologized because of what she did "for us"...roflmao, seriously no one bought into that.

A wife who loves her husband just would not exclude him like that.

Beta Boyz with No Testicular Fortitude always get excluded. Sit there like an idiot and watch silently, all the while worrying about looking like what you are - a fool - and you will get excluded. If you don't like getting burned, don't play with fire, especially if you can extinguish one before it gets out of control! Well-written, emotive story!!! 5/5!

Cuck drivel dressed up as something different,

Scores 1/5

What shit- the story & a lot of the writing. Mike's a moron not saying that he couldn't move or speak. She's a pure bitch & slut for not seeing her husband's incapacity. Him "secured" on the couch moaning... how could she not see that it wasn't due to excitement? Especially when she allowed Judy's husband to fuck her because she thought he wanted to swing but he's too out of it to do anything.

And the wording, her keeping on calling him in their discussions derogatory names on a continual basis... & him putting up with it... no basis in reality. Also no basis is that the next day, Mike wouldn't have been all over Steph exploding on her actions the night before. His explanation was pure nonsense, or those of a real weakling. Between everything, I stopped reading somewhere after halfway on page 1 as I couldn't take it anymore. It started good, but went south very fast. 2 stars & not sure it shouldn't have been 1.

Uh, Judy's guy was Jerry. Who is this "George" she's talking about bringing

back for a repeat performance?

Liked the story but ""C'mon, let’s get him ready for round two." seems to imply having sex again with the same people not getting another (Mile) involved.

Also, while sexing George wife said she had never had sex so good and now wants to have another round with George. I think Mike is getting played and pretty well too.

anon.1

Story shows the value of communication, and how much work women have to do to prop up men’s egos.

Can’t vote, sorry but a tend to identify myself with the personage and can’t stand the cuck thing

Second time that I have read this one. It reads like he was drugged so that ol’ mate could have a threesome. And his wife’s anger was so misplaced. She humiliated him, never even cared that she went to another room without her husband.

In the years to come, their marriage is going to need a lot of help, he will never fully trust her. With what she did and how she treated him when he tried to confess his pain how can he ever not doubt his wife.

A good story that plays with the emotions

5*. However, Mike was getting played by Stephanie and very well I might add. Mike was not participating in the love play with the two couples and Stephanie knew that. Steph told friend's husband she had never had sex so good and was much more graphic and excited than she was with her husband. And finally, in the context of the night, the wording Steph used "Let's get HIM ready for round two" surely implies she was not talking about Mike but the girfriend's husband. Nevertheless, a very good story.

anon.1

Que mierda...

nope