by rarmons
A clever little piece, thank you kindly! I wish Nate & Sonja all the best, and hope they have a long and happy life together!
Who had to clean the yoga mats and air our the room? Nasty.
here and generally enjoyed the story, but found the tale unfocused. Too many peripheral characters who are baring their soul in a room while others around them are fucking around them. It's like the author wanted to a therapy story and a sex story at the same time, instead of one leading to the other. I don't want to be to critical here, I enjoyed myself, but believe which a little more patience and work this could have been better.
But 4 stars, because it seems unfinished. It needed a second chapter AT LEAST. She should have dumped her bum husband and not worried about getting caught.
This story was hard to follow, too many couples.
And the twists ,you could get lost.
..thanks?..