All Comments on 'They Call Me Squirt'

Mark wondered why she never came home; but all the cops would say is that she was safe and didn’t want to come back.

The divorce papers arrived by registered mail and were very generous to him as she had everything she wanted, or needed.

Sara had 4 children but life as a single mom was hard once Squirt passed away. her prospects for a partner were slim as every man knew that she abandoned her first husband and didn’t want to be in a relationship with a woman who would leave him for a big dick.

Bad idea. Try concentrating on ONE story. Neither of these stories was worth the time spent to read them.

1 star

Agree. They were both just awful.

Loved it. Don't let these negative people get you. It's a fantasy, which most of these people forget.

The word "garbage" comes to mind!

I didn’t read your other story, but this cheating whore garbage is an example of your work, I didn’t miss anything.

The guys who complain about cheating whore, garbage, etc. obviously hang around this category only so they can express righteous indignation about what they can't get. Keep writing.

Your "writing" (and I use the term loosely) quantity is coming out of you as fast as diarrhea and is literally the same thing that diarrhea is too.

We get it, you live vicariously through a woman getting cock, as facing your own fears is too hard to do.

You aren't very good a writer, though marginally better than Damienss666 and at least semi-readable. But those are both extremely low bars.

why would she even go to his place? makes no sense. An old guy with a beer belly is something you want to test out?

Why is this person married? No respect for her husband. And the wife wants kids? Tome for the husband to ditch the cheating bitch. There usno way the bastards will be his she can't keep her legs closed.

Great story, don't understand all the criticism. Guess that they don't get that these are works of fiction. I for one enjoy the variety of stories in this category. It seems that many on this site only want hard core BTB stories. I like the uncertainty of what is to come. If I find a story headed in a direction I don't like, it is easy to back out and go to the next story. Keep up the good work and don't let the bastards get you down. Everyone would have to agree that they get their moneys worth/

I realize that this is fiction, but my problem is that it is such really stupid fiction. It’s like a story about Joe Biden, except they call him Squint.

Keep writing.

Don't worry about the low life's and their negative child like comments.

Thank you for sharing.

@firedog451, your comment speaks volumes.

And I agree to every word.

Why would a man want to see his woman with a chubby old guy? Because it is hot and if you are a young, slightly insecure guy who wants to learn how to make his wife squirt it may make it happen. I wanted to see my gorgeous 24 year old wife in a "beauty and the beast moment". He was ugly but gave a great massage. She was repulsed by him when we arrived. An hour later I watched in amazement as the geezer squeezed her inch long nipple with one hand as her pussy bucked against 2 fingers on his other hand. I almost fainted at the sight. Her body totally betrayed her. He never did make her squirt though. lol