All Comments on 'This is His Wife'

They say the first sentence in a story is the most important sentence. In this case it took me 10 lines to leave the story, therefor no voting. Even if the writing was bad, I did understand where this would go - goodbye.

illiterate cuck shit.

A waste of time and cyberspace

This story was so boring. I still can not tell you what the story is about or just what was going on. Writing was like a 15 yr old wrote but probably the 15 yr old would make better sense of it. I kept waiting for something anything to happen. Oh well win some lose some . I rate this as double minus 10 .SORRY

Yep, you're right.

The script is so tantalizing making me hard by second. Neelam is lucky to have such a nice husband.

The way Sharma proceeded to make her his was so hot and Neelam supported him very nicely. The climax was of Girish drenching his pants without touching.

I want to experience the same.

Thanks Siraj, yet again a beautiful story by you.

I sm already fan of your other incest stories.

Borirng

Loved the story. Send next part fast. Can't wait.

I wish I was married to a man like Girish

The story is original & good.

After alwayswantedtodo you are the best author of literotica. Please add more of your kinky naughty dialogues

Welcome back great author... Nice to see you again.... This is a good attempt... I'd like to put up a wish here... I need a terrific mom son incest story from you... Waiting

Welcome back author, we expect more incest mom son stories with great as similar to you earlier ones .

The characters were created perfectly.

This is the impresdion: after having created the 3 characters, sirajahmed10 just let them be themselves & the story unfolded by itself. Of course it is NEVER that easy.

NEELAM is a keeper. I wish i were married to a woman like her.

Mr Sharma is a lucky bastard (in my next life i will be Mr Sharma & will fuck Neelam until the big boss claims her for himself)

Like very much

:-)

Please write Part 2 of the story.

I really loved it! Erotic.

Awaiting the next Part .......... Enjoyed this part ....... Thanks !!!!

ohh

His wife is a keeper!

• • •

When my wife & I immigrated to Canada she was in her early 30s, a mother of two, & she had Bollywood looks. White men were attracted to her like flies to honey. In those days she used to tell me in full detail whenever a man flirted with her, was jitting on her, even when a man asked her out. Her stories made me proud of her, & i was excited more than a reasonable man was supposed to be in the situation.

I had adored my wife from the day we got married. For me it was her & only her. When other men started hitting on her, my total adoration turned into a fetishistic worshipping of her body & her personality.

She found a job as a part-time Person Friday at the head office of a company.

The CEO bumped into her by the coffee machine a week later. He engaged her in conversation, complimented her people skill & said she was bright. When my wife was telling me about the encounter she was ELATED, beyond herself eith happiness. I was genuinely happy for her & proud of her but i was also SECRETLY AROUSED.

A fortnight later she was promoted to a full time Admin. Four months later she was a coordinator.

She was still describing (in full detail) each conversation with the CEO. She was not hiding her exaltation. I was not hiding i was happy but I was hiding from her the fact that in my etotic fantasies she was already having sex with her big boss.

My wife first started working overtime. Then she got another position where some air travel was involved, often with overnight stay.

Two years later the CEO left the company. My wife was no longer working long hours.

She got a pisition where she travelled only exceptionally.

She never admitted to me to having had an affair with the big boss, @ least not in that many words.

She did often say that i was the most understanding husband in Canada.

She did say something like this:

"Our marriage & your love to me was put to an extrime stress test & passed it with flying colours... thanks to you... i will never leave. Should you ever leave me I would be devastated but could never hate you..."

I liked your story about your wife & her boss. It must be based on true events. Your wife is a keeper.

We are waiting for part 2. It would be another wonderful story. Looking forward

Very very erotic. Reasonably realistic.

Very erotic & sensuous. I really liked this story. I am a fan of stories that includes erotic talks during sex. To me it is wonderful story. would wait for another part of this story.

Very erotic (kinky too).

The story is multi-layered.

The storyline was intelligently conceived & brilliantly crafted.

❤

THE STORY WAS BRILLIANTLY CONCEIVED & MASTERFULLY CRAFTED. I LOVE IT. FIVE-STAR STUFF!

The characters were created perfectly.

This is the impression: after having created the 3 characters, sirajahmed10 just let them be themselves & the story unfolded by itself. Of course it is NEVER that easy!

NEELAM is a keeper. I wish i were married to a woman like her.

Mr Sharma is a lucky bastard (in my next life i will be Mr Sharma & will fuck Neelam until the big boss claims her for himself)

❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆!

I wish Neelam needed a favour from me.

When Sharma fucked Neelam in front of her husband Girish all 3 of them enjoyed those moments.

Sharma brought Neelam to his boss (the big boss), who is into commercial real estate among other businesses. He is taking Neelam alone to his office so she can sign the rental agreement. Neelam has just seen a video in the waiting room which shows her body in a nice outfit. Obviously the big boss finds her attractive.

Neelam & Girish know only too well that a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do.

Last but not least, I want to reiterate that NEELAM is a KEEPER!

:)

:)

❤

I really liked it.

Goes without saying that a husband who willingly (& yes! also enthusiastically) helps his wife have sex with powerful men must have a strong voyeur side &/or wife sharing fetish.

In my book Neelam's husband loves his wife not only 'truly madly deeply' but also 'selflessly & unconditionally'.

A married couple are a team: whatever Neelam is doing she does it for the team.

😊

In my book this wife sex story deserves an A+ because it "exceeds expectations" &/or "goes over and above". I gave you a

5+ [5.5/5.0=110% (★★★★★+)].

The story was intelligently and imaginatively conceived and appropriately crafted.

It is very very erotic, and essentially true to life.

Last but not least, Neelam is a keeper. Full stop.

👍👍!

This is an A+ story, I gave it a 5+ rating

(over 💯%, ☆☆☆☆☆+).

Hi, Sirajahmed10, in my book, this is your best story on Literotica.

Neelam is a keeper. She knows that sometimes a woman's gotta do what a woman's gotta do! Her husband is a trooper.

❤💛💚💙💜+

🙂

5.0 (❤💛💚💙💜)

💜💙💚💛❤

I LOVE (❤) it: 5.0 = 💯% (☆☆☆☆☆) 👍👍.

An excerpt from p. 2 of the story.

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Getting up from Girish's lap she looked deep into Sharma's burning eyes and seeing a fire engulfing them, she leaned forward and whispered 'do you want me to kiss you?'

'Yes, I have been wanting to be kissed ever since I laid my eyes upon you,' he replied holding her face in both hands.

'Then why did you not say so,' she asked.

'I could not dare ask due to his presence,' he replied.

'And now what has made you so bold,' she said caressing his cheeks with her hands.

'Being friends has made the difference,' he replied.

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shang40 - almost 5 years ago

Wonderful

The script is so tantalizing making me hard by the second. Neelam is lucky to have such a nice husband.

The way Sharma proceeded to make her his was so hot and Neelam supported him very nicely. The climax was of Girish drenching his pants without touching.

I want to experience the same.

Thanks Siraj, yet again a beautiful story by you.

I sm already fan of your other incest stories.

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rituforfun - almost 5 years ago

Wow. I wish

Loved the story. Send next part fast. Can't wait.

I wish I was married to a man like Girish.

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"Anonymous, 5 months ago

I LOVE (❤) it: 5.0 = 💯% (☆☆☆☆☆) 👍👍."

LOVED it! Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

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Anonymous, over 1 year ago

The story This is His Wife is

(a) erotic,

(b) kinky,

(c) romantic, &

(d) realistic, all in one.

I really liked it.

Goes without saying that a husband who willingly (& yes! also enthusiastically) helps his wife have sex with powerful men must have a strong voyeur side &/or wife sharing fetish.

In my book Neelam's husband loves his wife not only 'truly madly deeply' but also 'selflessly & unconditionally'.

A married couple are a team: whatever Neelam is doing she does it for the team.

☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0 = 100%)

A tour de force.

I really really LOVED this story.

It made my day.

★★★★★ (5.0)!

The wife from this story is a keeper. Full stop.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5.0) ❤❤!

🙈 🙉 🙊 !

I LOVED this story, gave you a

5 [4.8 = 96% (❤❤❤❤❤)]!

My kind of wife sex story! One of my "faves."

As someone said earlier, a tour de force!

☆☆☆☆☆!

Neelam is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥) 👍👍!

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Anonymous, about 2 years ago

I LOVE this story: ❤❤❤❤❤- [5- (4.55/5=91%)]! Very erotic! Reasonably realistic (something similar could have happened). Neelam is a keeper. Period.

I wish Neelam needed a favour from me.

When Sharma fucked Neelam in front of her husband Girish, all 3 of them enjoyed those moments.

Sharma brought Neelam to his boss (the big boss), who is into commercial real estate among other businesses. He is taking Neelam alone to his office so she can sign the rental agreement. Neelam has just seen a video in the waiting room which shows her body in a nice outfit. Obviously the big boss finds her attractive.

Neelam & Girish know only too well that a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do.

Last but not least, I want to reiterate that NEELAM is a KEEPER!

End quote.

☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0)!!!

❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ (5.0)!

A tour de force!

Neelam is a keeper. Full stop. Period.

Excerpt from the story.

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Getting up from Girish's lap she looked deep into Sharma's burning eyes and seeing a fire engulfing them, she leaned forward and whispered 'do you want me to kiss you?'

'Yes, I have been wanting to be kissed ever since I laid my eyes upon you,' he replied holding her face in both hands.

'Then why did you not say so,' she asked.

'I could not dare ask due to his presence,' he replied.

'And now what has made you so bold,' she said caressing his cheeks with her hands.

'Being friends has made the difference,' he replied.

'Had you ever thought you would get an opportunity to kiss me in front of him,' she asked pressing her lips on his cheek.

'No not even in my dreams,' saying it he kissed her with such passion that Neelam's knees buckled. Coming out of his grasp 'is that how you kiss your friends wife?' she asked.

End quote.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5), ❤❤!

Neelam is a keeper!

Neelam age 27 has a dynamic personality which wreaks havoc in the minds in hearts of men who were fortunate enough to have a look at her when she was in a mood to flaunt herself.

Neelam is a keeper. Full stop. Period.

In general it is not easy to br married to a very attractive woman.

My wife and I moved to Canada when she was 27 and a mother of two.

We soon realized that rich White Canadian men found her very very attractive. They were hitting on her left, right, and centre. That was not a problem in itself.

The problem was the fact she readily flirted with rich White men.

We are still married.

This story is very very erotic. Five star stuff!

It was very intelligently conceived and masterfully crafted.

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As Sharma stepped out Neelam peeping in asked 'did he go?'

'Yes and what an act that was,' he said.

'Don't tell me you did not enjoy. I saw you adjusting your pants when he kissed me,' she said.

'Yes I had to adjust as I feared he may notice it,' he said.

'Why what would have happened if he had noticed your tent up pants?' she asked.

'Then he might have taken advantage of you,' he replied.

'Is that not what we have planned at,' she asked coming to sit in his lap.

'Yes but not before few cards are placed on the table,' he said.

'Did he not say that he would bring the cheque tomorrow,' she asked.

'Cheques can get bounced,' he replied.

End quote.

I LOVED this story: ☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0).

Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT!)

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... she locked her lips over his as a huge orgasm shook her body.

Hearing her words he intensified his pounding and when he hit the rock bottom he shot his cum deep inside her and lay upon her fully exhausted.

Regaining his strength when he looked at Girish he saw the front of his pants being soaked and when their eyes met 'It's the first time I have cum without even touching myself,' said Girish.

End quote.

5.0 = 💯% (☆☆☆☆☆)

👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 (5.0) ,

☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ (5.0) .

❤ ❤!

GIRISH LOVES HIS WIFE NEELAM NOT ONLY "TRULY MADLY DEEPLY" BUT ALSO "SELFLESSLY AND UNCONDITIONALLY."

HE WOULD STAND BY HIS WOMAN COME HELL OR HIGH WATER.

IN MY BOOK THAT'S TRUE LOVE.

Neelam is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.

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Anonymous, over 4 years ago

EXCELLENT! INTENSELY EROTIC. REASONABLY REALISTIC.

His wife is a keeper!

• • •

When my wife & I immigrated to Canada she was in her early 30s, a mother of two, & she had Bollywood looks. White men were attracted to her like flies to honey. In those days she used to tell me in full detail whenever a man flirted with her, was hitting on her, even when a man asked her out. Her stories made me proud of her, & i was excited more than a reasonable man was supposed to be in the situation.

I had adored my wife from the day we got married. For me it was her & only her. When other men started hitting on her, my total adoration turned into a fetishistic worshipping of her body & her personality.

She found a job as a part-time Person Friday at the head office of a company.

The CEO bumped into her by the coffee machine a week later. He engaged her in conversation, complimented her people skills & said she was bright. When my wife was telling me about the encounter she was ELATED, beyond herself with happiness. I was genuinely happy for her & proud of her but i was also SECRETLY AROUSED.

A fortnight later she was promoted to a full time Admin. Four months later she was a coordinator.

She was still describing (in full detail) each conversation with the CEO. She was not hiding her exaltation. I was not hiding i was happy but I was hiding from her the fact that in my etotic fantasies she was already having sex with her big boss.

My wife first started working overtime. Then she got another position where some air travel was involved, often with overnight stay.

Two years later the CEO left the company. My wife was no longer working long hours.

She got a pisition where she travelled only exceptionally.

She never admitted to me to having had an affair with the big boss, @ least not in that many words.

She did often say that i was the most understanding husband in Canada.

She did say something like this:

"Our marriage & your love for me was put to an extrime stress test & passed it with flying colours... thanks to you... i will never leave. Should you ever leave me I would be devastated but could never hate you..."

End quote.

Neelam is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥), 👍👍!

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'So far so good and it's not advisable for you to witness what's going to happen now,' saying it he [Sharma] carried Neelam to her bedroom.

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[☆☆☆☆☆ (five!)]

Neelam had a strong desire and the strangth of character to become self employed.

She was ready to do whatever she had to do. Her husband is super supportive.

I wish Neelam needed a favour from me!

Neelam has decided to change her life and thus the well being of her family come hell or high water.

Herein below I am telling the story about my wife who has two persons in one body: the private one and the business woman one!

My wife has always behaved in a very sophisticated manner.

However when she interacts with a powerful man, she is different. I guess she knows that a man like that can affect her economic situation. In those situations she keeps ayes on the prize.

At a trade show where I accompanied her, she met a very influential man during lunch. They walked out together after lunch. I did not know where sne was. I found he and him in the hot tub. She first introduced the guy to me, and said, "hon, I am sorry but I am discussing something very important. We can meet in the lobby in one and a half hours. Bear with me, I'll make it up for you. I am here on business. You know I love you."

90 minutes later my wife met me.

She told me that she and the guy have to go over the figures one more time. They would do that in our sweet.

I asked her jokingly whether he is her lover.

She loked at me with a smile on her face and said, "Not yet, okay? If the business gets booming and I feel very very happy, I might get an itch to solidify that business relationship. I promise to ask for the hall pass from you."

_____

Post scriptum:

She went to his city to sign the 2nd contract.

I picked her up from the airport (I insisted on doing that.)

She told me she loved me more and more, and deeper than ever.

I aked her whether she wanted to tell me something.

She asked, "Can I get a retroactive Hall Pass for yesterday and this morning?"

I read this stoty three times. I got outright mesmerized by it each time.

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥) 👍👍!

☆☆☆☆☆ (5)

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NEELAM is a keeper. I wish i were married to a woman like her.

Mr Sharma is a lucky bastard (in my next life i will be Mr Sharma & will fuck Neelam until the big boss claims her for himself)

Love it. Very very eritic.

☆☆☆☆☆+ (5.0)!

☆☆☆☆☆+ (5.0)!

I really loved this story.

☆☆☆☆☆+ (5.0)

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Anonymous, 16 days ago

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... she locked her lips over his as a huge orgasm shook her body.

Hearing her words he intensified his pounding and when he hit the rock bottom he shot his cum deep inside her and lay upon her fully exhausted.

Regaining his strength when he looked at Girish he saw the front of his pants being soaked and when their eyes met 'It's the first time I have cum without even touching myself,' said Girish.

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Excellent: ❤❤❤❤❤ (5.0)!

In my book this story is a tour de force.

I gave it a 5.0 rating (= 100%).

Neelam and Girish are a team. Whatever Neelam is doing she does is for the team.

Needless to say she is a keeper. Full stop.

Loved it. 👍👍!

Excellent, ❤❤❤❤❤ (5.0 = 100% = A+)!

Excerpt from p. 1 of this story.

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... Sharma was on his feet to greet her and seeing him in person floored her totally. When Girish had informed she was of the opinion that he would be an old arrogant guy with a protruding belly, but what appeared before was an elegantly dressed tall personified gentleman in his early forties which blew the wind out of her. She went weak in her knees on seeing the towering personality standing before her.

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Bravo! A five star story.

This is a FIVE STAR STORY.

Very very EROTIC.

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

Nilaam is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.

LOVED IT. LOVED IT. LOVED IT.

Excellent: ★★★★★ (5.0)!

I LOVE Indian/Desi erotica.

This is one of the best Indian wife stories on Literotica.

In my book this is one of the best Indian mom-&-son incest stories on Literotica!

In my book THIS IS HIS WIFE is one of the best Loving Wife stories on Literotica.

The story is rather multifaceted.

Nilaam, the female protagonist, is dead set to get into retail business come hell or high water. Her husband, Girish, loves her "selflessly and unconditionally," and is very very supportive. It's a men's world out there and he knows that in certain situations, a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do.

This comment obviously pertains to a different story & category:

"Anonymous, about 7 hours ago

In my book this is one of the best Indian mom-&-son incest stories on Literotica!"

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT!

5.0 = 💯% (♡♡♡♡♡)!

👍👍!

In my opinion this story is a MUST READ.

I LOVED this story.

A tour de force.

5.0 = 💯% (♡♡♡♡♡).

Neelam is a keeper.

Neelam is a keeper! No ifs or buts. Full stop.

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shang40 - about 6 years ago

Wonderful

The script is so tantalizing making me hard by second. Neelam is lucky to have such a nice husband.

The way Sharma proceeded to make her his was so hot and Neelam supported him very nicely. The climax was of Girish drenching his pants without touching.

I want to experience the same.

Thanks Siraj, yet again a beautiful story by you.

I sm already fan of your other incest stories.

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When my wife & I immigrated to Canada she was in her early 30s, a mother of two, & she had Bollywood looks. White men were attracted to her like flies to honey. In those days she used to tell me in full detail whenever a man flirted with her, was jitting on her, even when a man asked her out. Her stories made me proud of her, & i was excited more than a reasonable man was supposed to be in the situation.

I had adored my wife from the day we got married. For me it was her & only her. When other men started hitting on her, my total adoration turned into a fetishistic worshipping...

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