All Comments on 'Twins and MIL Disciplined'

I placed this story under the BDMS category not Incest. I never write about Incest

The nearest to incest is the discipline that the "Daddy" does to his wife's sister and they are not blood related. If someone thinks that is incest they need to check the definition for true incest.

So happy you posted again!

Thought it might be interested as I thought it was incest, but alas it is not my cup of tea and it was in wrong category I will not give it a score.

I believe that there are some issues here in the comments regarding semantics, this is not incestuous in any way but it could turn that way after the twins are sent back to the house.

This is a great fantasy short story and should be read as such, in FANTASY all of natural mores and codes can be suspended at the authors wish, he/she has the artistic licence to make this happen.