All Comments on 'Untangling the Web Ch. 01'

I don't know who to root for in this story...it is way beyond my comprehension. It seems they are all losers that if any one of them becomes the "winner"...it would still be unsatisfactory....Oh wait the winner is Tiffany...she is outside the storyline...I hope.

Why is the question - to get it out of your system??? It isn't erotic and not really interesting nor close to entertaining - just one crude absurd subhuman after another not that you didn't warn us but this is below your history and abilities and negatively affects your credibility if you care or not.

Get it over and go on but not like this I / we hope!

Thought I'd re-read this so Ch.02 might make more sense, but it didn't help much. The characters are caricatures and the dialogue stilted. I kept waiting for Rodney to say something like “curses…foiled again,” or something equally trite. Guess I’ll go read Ch.02 now. <sigh>

The beginning quote is not by Scott, but by William Shakespeare (who else?). It's from Hamlet.

I read the first several paragraphs and gave up. Another me, I am great and the rest of the world is but a turd. Peeling potatoes seems to be a better more productive way to spend ones time.