All Comments on 'Warm!'

The guy is an asshole. 1*

Now that is a brilliant story. Thank you for that

If you want to check out his (her) writing in English, i recommend his story THE SEDUCTION OF MY WIFE. It is in Non-consent/Reluctance category, but you will probably like it; i did!

To Anomynous this is non English stories and quite a few of our Afrikaans stories is also presented in English. Dolphin jou stories bind mens van die begin tot einde.

English, please. Since it is an english speaking/written site it would be nice to judge your talent in the english language.

Ek het self al so 'n jong vroutjie gespyker terwyl haar dogtertjie by ons in die kamer speel - salig onbewus van wat haar mamma en die oom op die bed doen.

Ohhh die storie het my nou sooo erg warm. wens net my man was nou hier.

Geen genade, dis nou 'n storie!

weer lees ek pen-orent...

Ek hou van alwayswantedto, drtruth, klrxo, rgjohn, moondrift & nightshadow se stories.

mmm

Uitstekende storie. Bly jy is terug