by salehabaji
You are are a wonderful writer. You know the art of writing. You should write more but I would request you one thing. Try to avoid mentioning, religious words etc. as it may hurts people who belong to that religion. Try to limit it to erotic as much as possible. Since you know the art of writing, make it more detailed, engage in sexy conversation and dialogues etc. Other things are fine. All I enjoyed but not the part you started mentioning Qurani ayat etc. Holy verses to be avoided, in my opinion.