by iloveall
You are a very good writer. You know very well to hold the nerves of readers. It is creatively erotic and addictive.
It becomes very difficult to stop reading it in between, I have read all the 4 parts in couple of days.
Bhai aur likhiye is story ko. Main soch raha tha ki Tarun aur deepak Deepa ko unke manager se bhi chudvayenge...majboor kar ke. Pls age likhte rahiye... ye kahani bohot hi romanchak hai