by saagar_manthan
Beautiful expression of desire in Marathi - it was as if the entire scene came alive. You have a gift Saagar
Hey, your stories are really good. this one is one of the best that you have written. Flow of story is also nice.
Why don't you try your hand at the story from a female point of view. Like this story being written from Lalita's view and words. could be fun.
This is one of the best stories we have read. Hope there will be next part.