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"Hello Alanna," Ms. Bliss said, sitting down gracefully next to the cage. Alanna nodded at her, smiling, but she didn't speak. Ms. Bliss smiled back understandingly. "I know we already had a talk before about whether or not you're happy here, I just need to reaffirm that. If you feel abused under the current circumstances or no longer wish to remain here, you may choose to go with me right now. You would be put into a group home and taught a trade to earn your upkeep. I will tell you honestly that it is not as nice a home as you have here, that you will be watched by the government for the remainder of your life, and that you will not receive as good of an education as your Master has been providing. It will also be nearly impossible to return here if you changed your mind. However, you will also have more freedom, there will be no corporal punishment, and you will still be cared for and many women have pleasant and happy lives under those circumstances. Do you understand everything that I'm saying?"
Alanna nodded, to indicate she understood, but her heart was beating madly in her chest. Her feet and bottom seemed to ache more than ever, and the bars of the cage she was in felt very close around her.
"Knowing your options, Alanna, do you want to stay here?"
- COMMENTS
avengilineover 6 years agoOut of all of them this one is my favorite so far. This particular chapter is so relatable. I absolutely love it, and partially wanted to cry with and for Alanna.
joodlealmost 12 years agoHey Angel, great job! This is the best chapter I have read in a series lately. Normally "punishment" consists of some feather tickling and abstinence for 24 hours. This was more what I would expect from punishment. This separates this story from countless others. I feel that this story has a lot more potential with the characters and setting that you have created. The mean guy, Curtis, and the teacher Ms Bliss help shape the story and give it direction. Excellent chapter and looking forward to more of this story!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI absolutly loved all of you chapters on Submission. Please hurry with ch. 14 the suspense is killing me. She must choose to stay with David and they must prove the stupid government guy wrong about her. I can totally relate to Alanna spirt I'm very spotted myself. Although not in this type of relationship. I find my self spoiled and a bit bratty at time.
FlamingInnocencealmost 12 years agoYou've left me in total agony here! I'm desperate to know what Alanna's thinking. I can't wait for the next chapter. You're story keeps me so intrigued!
Maynessalmost 12 years agoI love this, such a difficult position to be put in. On one hand David cares for her alot and is only following the rules but on the other its annoying that she has to be treated in that way. I wish she could leave and create a life for herself and have the relationship with David on consensual equal terms. It would be an education to all! Thank you so much for writing this, I look forward to the next chapter.
